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Hook me

Thursday, November 12th, 2009

Welcome again to Excerpt Thursdays. Today we have 3 (three) excerpts intended to send you to your bookstore, be it online or brick and mortar. I’m still working out the quirks for this and I’m learning as I go along. I’ve lengthened the word count of the excerpts to 500. Hopefully, between the cover, the setup (if there is one) AND the excerpt, we’ll have you hooked in no time flat. ;)

And to go along with this theme of giving you a sample of a writer’s work before you buy, The Season website now features FREE READS. This is another–better–way to sample an authors’ work absolutely free. Currently there are 4 novellas available for download. Stop by and give these authors a try!

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A Christmas Scandal ~ Jane Goodger
Release Date: October 6 ~ Publisher: Kensington

In this sequel to Marry Christmas, Maggie Pierce has loved Lord Edward Hollings for years, but she cannot have him because of a terrible (it really is terrible!) secret she must keep from him. She truly believes that if he knew the truth, he would leave her forever and for that reason, she’s decided to pursue an older gentleman she doesn’t love to save the family from ruin. They are at a ball and Lord Hollings has decided he can no longer allow the woman he loves to pull away from him.

It was nearing midnight when the small orchestra began playing the Emperor’s Waltz, one of Maggie’s least favorite Strauss compositions. It wasn’t because the piece wasn’t lovely, but because it began strong and lively, then turned so soulful she rarely was dried-eyed by the end. And she was to dance with Lord Hollings.

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AChristmasScandalMaggie wished she had been smart enough to disappear somewhere, for she didn’t think she’d be able to get through the Emperor’s Waltz in Lord Hollings’ arms without completely breaking down.

“Miss Pierce,” he said, coming up behind her.

She nodded, praying he couldn’t hear her heart which was pounding so painfully, and she held up her arms, carefully placing one in his firm hand, the other on his shoulder.

He held her lightly as they began to move among the other dancers. “As I recall, this is not your favorite Strauss,” he said, completely surprising her.

“I cannot believe you remember that.”

He smiled. “It seems I am cursed to remember every detail about you.” He tightened his hold just then, and she let him.

Something was different about him. He kept his eyes on hers, his gaze holding a strange, dark intensity that made a flood of heat nearly consume her. Oh, dear God.

They danced without speaking, without smiling, and a casual observer might think they were a couple who was bored, with life, with each other. But someone who was watching intensely might have seen Maggie’s parted lips, the way her breath was catching oddly in her chest, the way his arms pulled her subtly closer and closer until they were nearly fully embracing.

When the music stopped, Lord Hollings pulled her out of the ballroom and to the empty veranda. He didn’t say a word. Neither did she.

Even when he pressed her against the cold stone of the mansion, even when he brought his mouth against hers, even when he pressed his aroused body to hers, even then, they were silent. She pulled him against her, reveling in the feel of his mouth, his tongue, his hands that seemed to touch her everywhere, her breasts, her neck, between her legs. And she, my God, she touched him on his face, his neck, his chest, and fleetingly, because she simply could not help herself, his arousal.

He pulled away, breathing harshly, staring at her as if she’d bewitched him. Swallowing heavily, he finally spoke.

“He can’t have you.”

And then he pressed a finger against her lips, to stop her from speaking, and then put that same finger against his mouth. He left her there, just as another couple walked onto the veranda, giving her a silent warning to remain still and silent.

Maggie remained on the veranda until the other couple, driven back inside by the cold, left. She hadn’t realized just how frigid the air was until they were gone, then she began shaking violently, tears streaming down her face.

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Crushing Desire ~ April Dawn
Release Date: December 2009 ~ Publisher: Breathless Press

Crushing Desire Mockup“I suppose that you were letting him touch you so intimately because you didn’t want someone inside to hear your complaint?” he asked, shaking her slightly.

“But I was–.”

His lips crashed into hers, cutting off her words. The kiss was hard, a crushing of her mouth beneath his, yet still she sighed. Her bones became water at the exquisite feel of his body against hers. She flowed against him and he moaned, his lips softening as they slid lightly over hers. He released her arms, and his hands slipped around her and roamed her back. The exquisite thrill of his embrace filled her with a longing that begged to be satisfied. His tongue slid along her lips, encouraging her to open for him, and with a whimper she did. Her fingers surged up to his neck and into his hair. The firm demands of his hands drew her into his body, fingers slipping lower on her back. She gasped into his mouth as his fingertips grazed her hip sending tremors through her body as the pleasure of his caresses overwhelmed her.

Joshua groaned, thrusting her from him unexpectedly. He breathed heavily for a moment, arms spread slightly; gaze firmly rooted to the floor. Reena’s fingers flew to her lips, touching the still moist flesh.

“Now do you see what can happen, Miss Harrison?” he asked, nostrils flared. “You need to be more careful who you retire to the gardens with.”

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The Promise ~ TJ Bennett
Release Date: May 1 ~ Publisher: Medallion Press

Set in 1525 Pavia (Italy), The Promise tells an intimate love story played out on the canvas of history. A mercenary must overcome his wounded heart and convince an unwilling widow to marry him in order to keep a promise to a dying friend. A curse on every man who loves her forces the Spanish beauty to rebuff him, but their passion for one another is stronger than the mysterious misfortune that plagues any with the courage to defy the curse. As war draws near and danger surrounds them, will they tempt fate to love one another in the face of certain death?

The Promise front“Don’t be afraid.” Günter spoke in a soft voice, as though he sought to gentle a trapped but injured animal he wished to aid.

Do not be afraid?

From Alonsa’s vantage point, Günter seemed as imposing as a mountainside. She noted the sharp planes of his face, from the sensual slash of his mouth to the ruffled dark-blond hair she had tangled in her fingers just moments ago. She could not look away. She clenched her trembling hands behind her, stared at his mouth, and cursed her own weakness.

“I do not fear you,” she denied feebly. Just your kisses and your touch ….

“I have always known you belonged to me.” His gaze roamed over her face. He moved closer, until his chest brushed her breasts. “Always. Mayhap before we ever met.”

“Now who speaks as one insane?” Her voice sounded husky, as though she had just arisen from his bed after a night of ardent lovemaking.

He smiled slowly. “I want you to speak to me like that after the first time I take you,” he said in a gravelly whisper. “Low and soft, like a woman well-pleasured. Which you will be.”

Her hand moved of its own accord. The slap rang out in the quietness of the tent, her palm stinging from the force of it. Though it left a red welt across his cheek, he did not react.

He stared at her, his proud nose flaring, his green eyes narrowing to slits. He slid his hand once more around her waist and pulled her to him. She resisted the draw, pushed with her palms against his chest. He leaned into her, and she thought he would kiss her again. Instead—to her surprise—he buried his face in her hair and inhaled deeply. His hand rose and fisted there for a moment, but he released her. She almost fell backward from the sudden loss of his strong arms encircling her.

Günter’s jaw clenched. Then the corner of his mouth lifted in a provocative smile. He made a loose fist with one hand and gave her chin a light tap.

“Fight me, then. Run, if you must. Hide—if you can. But you will not escape your fate.” He pinned her with the heat of his gaze. “I am your fate,” he vowed, and turning on his heel, walked out of the tent.

For reviews, excerpts, and news, visit TJ Bennett at http://www.tjbennett.com

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Hook Me

Thursday, November 5th, 2009

Hook me.

It’s like a dare isn’t it?

I’ve read your back cover blurb and it’s…oh, I don’t know, so-so. I’m not convinced I should spend my hard earned $4.99 – $13.95 on your book. Let me check   the inside excerpt. Darn, it doesn’t have one. I could read the first couple pages, but that usually doesn’t do me much good. I’ll always remember a certain perfume shop scene that began one of my all-time favourite reads. Oh look, the latest Anna Campbell…

This is exactly what authors don’t want to happen to their book. I mean with the bookshelves packed tight with a gazillion books competing for readers’ attention and dollars, it would be such a shame if the poor author had a cover attractive enough to catch readers’ eyes but their back cover blurb wasn’t quite enough to hook ‘em. They need just one other thing to compel perspective readers to buy–a truly “hookable” excerpt.

What’s a hookable excerpt? It’s different for everyone, I imagine. I know what hooks me (serious sexual tension, great conflict) won’t be the be-all hook for everyone–though, I daresay, it will appeal to quite a few (Threw in a little Victorian speak). LOL.

Following are three excerpts meant to get readers to invest their time (reading) and part with a token amount of cash. In return, hopefully, they’ll have discovered another author to add to their “instant buy list”. ;)

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Devil in a Kilt in Red Sage Secrets Volume 27 Untamed Pleasures - Nicole North

Length: Novella

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Shauna MacRae has been having uncontrollable erotic daydreams about a certain Highlander for months. Determined to rid herself of these intrusive, overwhelming fantasies, she heads to the Highland Games to find a real kilted hottie. A mysterious older man compels her to hold a four-hundred-year-old, two-handed claymore. In the next instant, she finds herself in a Scottish castle bedchamber, though she doesn’t know at first that it’s 1621.

She gaped at the dangerous, heavily-muscled giant with long, dark hair standing before her. He was more than a foot taller than she.

“Omigod.”

A straight white scar ran from his forehead to his jaw on the right side of his face, but the injury hadn’t affected his eye. His gaze pinned her to the spot. She knew those eyes, pale aquamarine-blue with a darker rim around the outside of the irises, surrounded by thick, dark lashes. He studied her and frowned with a wicked, black slash of his brows.

Her fantasy lover was back.

“Not now! Very bad timing.” She shook her head, trying to escape her daydreams.

He glanced at the sword on the floor, then back to her. “Ye think to kill me with my own claidheamh dà làimh, do ye, lass?”

At first, she could hardly understand the words he’d rolled up in the thick Scottish burr, then finally decided most of them were English.

Huh? He never said things like that in her fantasies. In fact, he never spoke English, only purred those Gaelic phrases that sounded so exotic and arousing.

“Explain yourself!” he demanded, sending her a glare such as she’d never imagined.

“No, I—”

The candle’s light glinted off the blade of a dagger in his other hand, and warmed his sun-bronzed skin—dear God, he was completely naked just like in her dreams. So why was he being such a bastard?

“This is the worst fantasy I’ve ever had.”

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THE CONQUEROR - Kensington/Zebra ~ Kris Kennedy

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The bench thumped forward. “You’re hurt.” He ran a finger over the bruise on her shoulder, a soldier’s swift appraisal. A ripple of goosebumps sped under his hand. He froze.

She was blushing a pale shade of pink. Dark, wet hair hung in tangled locks across the red linen and her white shoulder, creating a startling contrast in colors. The combination of such an ethereal face and the sudden, innocent desire dawning there made him snatch his hand back as if burned.

“I’ll tend it when you’re done,” he said roughly.

She ducked her head and muttered some inaudible reply. She could have said Stephen’s army was marching for the inn and he wouldn’t have heard. Such a hard, hot pounding hadn’t surged through him in many a year.

“What did you say?” he asked, dimly aware she’d been speaking.

“I said, I did not expect such a thing as all this from my night.” She waved her hand. “Did you?”

He groaned audibly. This would never do. She could be swathed in sacks and buried under a haystack and it would not help. Already the image of her stretched out beneath him, black hair streaming over the pillows, was more vivid than the whole past year of his life.

“Nay, I never expected such a thing as you.”

She smiled faintly. “Fools, I think we agreed.”

“Without sense.”

“Entirely.”

He drew back, leveled his tone. “I would have you regain yours, ere something happens you’ll be sorry for.”

She paused, and he had a momentary thought he might escape unscathed. That she would do the prudent thing, save him from this rampaging desire. But her next words smashed the faint hope. “Sense is only one way to know a thing, Pagan,” she whispered. “I’m sure we could find another.”

In a single move he was up, around the table, pulling her to her feet.

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MASTERING THE MARQUESS - Kensington/Zebra ~ Vanessa Kelly

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Meredith jerked back, more stung by his words than she could have imagined. She drew herself up to her full height.

“Lord Silverton, I’m sure I do not deserve your insults. If you’re not willing to discuss this matter in a rational fashion, then I must ask you to leave my room. We can continue this conversation when we have both returned to London.”

The anger in his eyes slowly transmuted into something else. Meredith felt a warning chill shoot up her spine as his lips parted in a slow smile—the one that always made her knees grow so weak. She forced herself to move away from him, but he matched her step for step.

“As a matter of fact, Meredith, I’m not feeling rational at all. And I would like to point out this is my house, not yours. I have no intention of going anywhere.”

“My lord,” Meredith quavered. She swallowed, taking one more stab at fending him off. “When your mother and I spoke this morning …”

Silverton laughed. The unexpected, husky sound caused her heart to beat erratically against her breastbone.

“My sweet, there are two words no man wants to hear when he is about to make love to his woman, and they are, your mother!”

“But I’m not your woman,” she protested.

“After last night you are most certainly my woman.”

He advanced toward her with a dangerous gleam in his eye. Meredith retreated again, but he continued to stalk her across the room until she found herself backed against the wall. He quickly pinned her by placing his hands on either side of her shoulders as he pressed his lower body against her. With a sense of shock, she registered the heavy length of his arousal through her nightclothes.

“I’m not letting you go, so you might as well get used to it,” he said.

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